Sunday, June 27, 2010

///FIRST FEATURE 6.27.10

page 38.

i don't know what's wrong. granted, it's only been a couple days like this... but i can't seem to find a spark. nothing is going down with ease. i'm fighting for every word. i feel like i like the new changes in the outline... yet i feel like i'm undoing them as i go along.

i have a couple days off where i won't be able to work on it at all. maybe it just needs time to breathe.

maybe i need time to breathe.

He kicks him again and again and again.

WOMAN (CONT’D)

You’re going to spoil him.

The Man stops.


i stop. i just wish the ants would too.

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